Shayla
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Age : 33
Registration date : 2008-08-21
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 Subject: For my ex boyfriend  Thu Aug 21, 2008 5:30 pm |
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I will love you until the world stops spinning
And the stars fall from the midnight sky
My love has been true since the beginning
I swear on my life I will never tell you goodbye
You are what keeps this smile on my face
You're the one that chases away my fears
Every time I hear your voice, my heart begins to race
You're th eone that eases away my tears
I give you this vow to love you forever
I promise to always be faithful till the end
I swear I'll never cause your heart to sever
I Promise my love for you isn't pretend
Every inch of my heart belongs to you
No one can take your place
I Vow to you I will never be untrue
You are someone I could never replace
I will love you until the sun burns out
My love will last through think an thin
I love you completly without a doubt
You've made me happier then I have ever been |
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ProMeTheuS
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Registration date : 2008-06-09
Number of posts : 521
. : Deadly Four'S
Reputation : 50 Points
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| Subject: Re: For my ex boyfriend Fri Aug 22, 2008 1:30 pm |
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Yo, I Feel The Emotion in This Shit, It Was Ok... You Said What You Needed to Say Right? But I Would Have To Say That You Used The Same Concepts Over In Here Like...
Every inch of my heart belongs to you
No one can take your place
I Vow to you I will never be untrue
You are someone I could never replace
You Could Come With Something More Creative For The First One In Bold, Your Rhymes Were Even Nearly The Same Word On It.
Other Than That It Was a Good Drop From Ya, Keep Improving. |
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Akademik
Moderator
Age : 33
Registration date : 2008-06-22
Number of posts : 405
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Reputation : Hip-Hop's Savior
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| Subject: Re: For my ex boyfriend Fri Aug 22, 2008 3:39 pm |
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Yea I Agree^^^^^
But This Piece Was Nice And Deep. Good Job! |
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