O.Aces
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 Subject: Mehh A Key..  Wed Aug 20, 2008 7:13 am |
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Can you believe my mother gave birth to a masterpiece,thrashed and burned in the factory
Left to bask it and give out Like passive service At Applebees..
To those perched singing happily..Reimburse me with flattery..
Im sick of the jerks living lavishly trapped in Virtual reality
I had to be a rap elite and lash these geeks in placid speech
Or massive creeps inactive streaks would soar beyond the wrath of me
Don’t panic once I “ravish beats” like overcooked vegetables
Progress and see for yourselves that my poems forsook nebbish fools
Contest with who?..they’ll have to wait around to measure up
Before all hell/hail breaks loose like unexpected weather struck
What other artist do you that can uplift in game in countenance
By spewing toxic/talk sick waste just like I pissed away a counselors shift
Its nothing to a pro my spirit mushroomed in a glow
And turned the atlas appearance backwards by touching on the globe
Steadly publishing the scrolls of excellence for the people
Stating why im lord of the rings..with no repentance for smeegle
So listen in while I greet in open arms to my palace
Built from jewel shards and fish scales picked from the cauldron of catfish.. |
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The_Bandit
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| Subject: Re: Mehh A Key.. Wed Aug 20, 2008 9:45 am |
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Can you believe my mother gave birth to a masterpiece
Stop Act'n Like Yo Mama Is My Mama Maaaaaan !!!
Decent Drop Keep At It, Nice Flow, Smooth Rhymes In Places, Str8 Concepts !!! |
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O.Aces
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| Subject: Re: Mehh A Key.. Wed Aug 20, 2008 1:58 pm |
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| hahah im sorry i forgot she was your mother..nah but thanks for the feed. |
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Akademik
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| Subject: Re: Mehh A Key.. Fri Aug 22, 2008 3:35 pm |
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| Lol Good Piece Decent Vocab Stay Up! |
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