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~Sinister-Fate~
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 Subject: The Don Diss Mon Aug 04, 2008 6:39 pm |
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Ok this is my first ever audio i hope you all like it. Quality is kinda fucked but what ever
http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=357538401
You aint shit you got a CD like cena you cant see me (he said he had a CD)
that shit wouldnt sell if the MP3 if it was projected in 3D
Rippen your ass on this G beat south side you cant even see street
First audio and i comen with extreme heat
Fuck i wouldnt even use you to wash my dishes switch to palmolive (Dawn is a dish soap)
break a plate on your head Kick you in the face make you become all stiff
Wash the dishes bitch get to the grit and grim
Punch you in the stomach for that spit and shine
Wash the dishes bitch get to the grit and grim
Punch you in the stomach for that spit and shine
Rip this bitch at the adams apple
Use the blood to mix my snapple
Your wack like a fat kids playen at kims/atkins (atkins is a diet that makes ppl fat)
Chew on your femur spit it out like i smashshins
Wouldnt but your CD if i saw it at a flea market for free
Venomoust shit you wish my bite wont allow you to see
Wash the dishes bitch get to the grit and grim
Punch you in the stomach for that spit and shine
Wash the dishes bitch get to the grit and grim
Punch you in the stomach for that spit and shine
Im sharp like a razor ill slice this bitch like a water melon
Your girl on my dick because she got her mell on
I added the hook for the hell of it
Mr big shot Mr i got a cd fucker quit
you couldnt link a punch if you was playen connect four with mike tyson
Got beef I got that foot long ball park frank fuck with me you wanna die son
Wash the dishes bitch get to the grit and grim
Punch you in the stomach for that spit and shine
Wash the dishes bitch get to the grit and grim
Punch you in the stomach for that spit and shine
Wash the dishes bitch get to the grit and grim
Punch you in the stomach for that spit and shine
Wash the dishes bitch get to the grit and grim
Punch you in the stomach for that spit and shine |
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ThePope
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| Subject: Re: The Don Diss Mon Aug 04, 2008 8:34 pm |
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| nice i like the beat good write. im thinkin you could have came stronger had you slowed it down just a tad. good lyrics and diss |
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ProMeTheuS
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| Subject: Re: The Don Diss Mon Aug 04, 2008 8:51 pm |
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| Sin, Whatever Anyone Say Yo, Keep At This Mann, You're Going To Go Down As An Emcee, ppls Just Feel You'll Be a Threat, But You Can't Give Up On This, You Got Mad Potential, I Know You Could Have a Good Flow, You Just Got To Write your Peices Right, Get In The Beat N Shit Ya Know? Keep It Up Yo, And DEFINATLY Do More Audio, Diss Was Cool, Just Has Alot Of Potential |
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| Subject: Re: The Don Diss Mon Aug 04, 2008 9:35 pm |
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Ehh..
Well, Im Sorry Man, Buht I Gotta Be Honest, N Tell Yuh Wuht Yuh Need To Work On.. Only Way To Improve.. Yuh knoo?!
1) Flow, You Gotta Write This Ish To The Beat As Your Listenin To It. And You Started Your Verse Before The Beat Even DROPPED.! Yuh Needa Feel Tha Beat.. IHt'z LIke Making Love.. lOl..!!, But Make Sure Yur Flow Goez Well With Tha Beat..!!.. And Your Starting Your Verse WAY TO EARLY.
2) Emotion, Even I Have Problem With Thiz. On The Track,Audio.. You Gotta Sound MEAN.. GULLY, Sound Like Yur Fucking Heated At That Bitch, And Go In Like U Tryin To Kill Him..!! Sound MEAN.
3) Some Of Yur Lines Were WAY TO LONG, And Some Of Them Were WAY TO SHORT,
When Yur Flowing To A Short Line, Don't Say The Words So Fast..!!, Talk Slowly, Or Have Like A Little Pause IN Between The Wordz..!!
4) Act Like You Kno Wuht YUh Doin..!!
Like.. Showboat Sometimez, Not So Much, But Act Like You've Done It Before..!!..
You Should Listen To Some Rap Songz, See How Different People Flow, Like To The Beat, And Select That Kind Of Style, Or Come Up With Yur Own Style, That Flowz With Tha Beat..!!
All Honest Feed Muh Dudee..!!
Keep At It, Whenever You Down To Battle, Holla..!!
-Rated-!
Stay ^ |
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ProMeTheuS
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| Subject: Re: The Don Diss Mon Aug 04, 2008 10:40 pm |
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Damn^
Nice Feed, I Didn't Really Leave Any Feed, I Just Drunk a Couple A Beers And Told You That You'll Get Better, But You Will, Just Do That Shit^^.. |
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~Sinister-Fate~
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| Subject: Re: The Don Diss Mon Aug 04, 2008 11:31 pm |
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| Thanks for the feed and yeah i feel ya free thanx much homie and pope nigga i need some beats so i can rap for pope productions |
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Qwik
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| Subject: Re: The Don Diss Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:54 am |
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take My advice Son Remember Your verse By Heart...And fit it to the Beat
If you havin a tough time gettin the square in the circle hole you just carve the sides down till it fits...Its CAlled Editing Your Veres Take It from Somebody who has been Spittin on beats since 13..YA DIG |
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~Sinister-Fate~
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| Subject: Re: The Don Diss Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:55 am |
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| yeah i got ya homie thanks for the feed man |
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| Subject: Re: The Don Diss Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:59 am |
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| Yea, Get Yo Diddly Dig On And Make Another One Of These Muh Fuckers Man, I Look Forward To It |
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| Subject: Re: The Don Diss Wed Aug 06, 2008 1:05 am |
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| Yeah i am in the works mayne |
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