ProMeTheuS
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Subject: Reply To a Ghost Mon Aug 04, 2008 8:19 am |
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...Dear Mr. Marshall Mathers...
*Sing For The Moment*
I Really Liked Your Song, How You Speak, We Admire Your Wealth.. But Through The Wire Itself, The Work I'm Putting In Is Just Getting Fired From Hell.. I Desire The Health, And How Life Can Actually Continue With No Depression.. When You Become Those Of Blessing, It's Like a Blank Menu With NO Slections.. And Soon Enough, All Fails, Avoiding My Virtues... Exploited Alerts Through a Lifetime, My Lyrics Are Poison, They Hurt You... Now Back On Topic, As I Live, Loving My Newest Wife It's Getting Through With Knifes, Because The Whole Time Around Her, I Only Pursue Your Life... She Just Signed For Divorce, So I Missed My First Studio Session Alone At Home I Spit The Verse Through The Aggression Clenching, Balling My Fists, I Don't Know Where To Turn *John 3:16* Up It Flames, Tear it And Let It Burn! "THERES A VERSE, IS THIS WHAT YOU ARE ASKING FOR"? "JUST LIKE MY LAST DIVORCE? YOU WANT ME TO PASS REMORSE"? ****
Several Weeks Later
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I Forgot About It All, I Must Have Used This For a Tissue.. But For The Issues? Nothings Gained, Feel Like a Whore In Mis-Use.. I Probably Will Never Get Back To The Mic.. Because, As You See, That Only Lasted A Nite.. I Understand I'm Just Not Worthy Of One Dream, As Thought.. Your Dream Was Bought, See, You See What Your Singing Caused?.. I'm Kidding, It's All My Wifes Fault, Right? She Never Held Loyalty.. But Hey, Depression's Better That Royalty? What a Lesson, You Fooling Me?.. Shoud I Not Question Your Beleif? Fuck It, I'll Go Shoot Her Now!.. Make The Bitch Lose Her Mouth, Isn't That What Shady Would Do?.. Just Kill Her And Her Husband, Take a Baby Or Two?.. Come On, We All Know That Halies Crazy For You.. I Haven't Heard My Daughter's Voice Yet.. You're Probably Saying What? And All This Boy's Said?.. Yeah, I Love My Blood, She Circulates In My Family.. No Help, As The Earth Will Quake This Insanity.. Maybe This Letter Will Be My Last Veiws Last Words, Last Truths.. And You Get To Take Place In It.. As I Sit Here Strung Out In My Basement.. I'm Bout To Let It All Hang, If You Catch The Sumblimal.. Sorry, I Know, Trying To Keep This Text To a Minimal.. As You See, I'll Never Set This Life Back To a Boast.. I Know You Have Your Own Writtens, But This Time, Write Back To a Ghost..
~One Love~ |
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ThePope
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Subject: Re: Reply To a Ghost Mon Aug 04, 2008 12:26 pm |
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nice ish man complex got me thinkin wha? |
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ProMeTheuS
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Subject: Re: Reply To a Ghost Mon Aug 04, 2008 1:19 pm |
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Thanks..Uppin |
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Zos
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Subject: Re: Reply To a Ghost Mon Aug 04, 2008 1:25 pm |
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nice verse man, good concept
vocab was very nice, sophisticated, like shady;s meaning n story i totally felt flow was wicked... multies rode right off the tongue
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ProMeTheuS
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Subject: Re: Reply To a Ghost Mon Aug 04, 2008 1:26 pm |
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Yo Yo, Thanks Alot..Uppin |
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