Zos
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Age : 33
Registration date : 2008-06-10
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. : Zos the BOSS
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 Subject: Dead at seventeen topical verse gainst too damn good  Sat Jul 26, 2008 1:31 pm |
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-+Dead at seventeeN+-
wuts happenin, god im blind. agony claws my mind im just a number, 6 2 8 4 5 9/
i miss my girl, i miss my home, too much air rushin to my dome overwhelmed. so alone/
when i arrived here..no remorse. just lyin in rows of corpses but goddamn i dunno the source/
ayo cant no one laugh at that, as im frigid tryna catch a breath in a section labeled 'Traffic deaths'/
the day i died was the same old shit, shoulda took the bus, cant hang on it, went to deaths door an banged on it/
i was too cool to bus, got me a ride, said to my mom'all the kids drive' thats the last time she saw me alive/
2:50 the bell rings, free till tomorrow. went to the car i had just borrowed fuck man i can feel the sorrow/
it dont matter how it went i was playin. goin too fast car's swayin aint cared about gas. i aint payin/
i was havin fun. it was a blast..FUCK YAH of metal an glass, jus when i hit i look back on my past/
CRASH! i felt a wicked jolt like i been ripped by a boat. mashed up my face bloodied my coat/
i cant be dead i havent lived! i wanna go back to what i did! one more chance please i want to live!/
im in a box, where they carry me? i hear shovels this shit is scaring me. im not dead please dont bury me!/
ill be lonely! dead an green! theyll throw me on deaths trampoline. please god, im only seventeen!/
Last edited by ZOS128 on Wed Jul 30, 2008 12:37 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : hot to how in bar 8) |
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Akademik
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| Subject: Re: Dead at seventeen topical verse gainst too damn good Sun Jul 27, 2008 1:37 am |
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| This Was Cool Good Creativity And Nice Depth |
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Zos
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Age : 33
Registration date : 2008-06-10
Number of posts : 318
. : Zos the BOSS
Reputation : Keeper of the Medals
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| Subject: Re: Dead at seventeen topical verse gainst too damn good Wed Jul 30, 2008 12:37 pm |
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