Pun'Isha
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 Subject: Zos28 vz Too Damn Good (Round 1)  Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:42 am |
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Round 1 Of The Topical Medal
Zos28 vz Too Damn Good
Votez Consist Of:
Originality
Creativity
Flow
Content/Complexity
Enjoyment
4 Bar Verses Due
July 27th 11:59 Est
Check ins due bye
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Too Damn Good
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| Subject: Re: Zos28 vz Too Damn Good (Round 1) Thu Jul 24, 2008 1:52 am |
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Zos
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| Subject: Re: Zos28 vz Too Damn Good (Round 1) Thu Jul 24, 2008 2:51 am |
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Man theres TWO of these..
but CHECK??? DELETE ONE PLEASE |
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Zos
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| Subject: Re: Zos28 vz Too Damn Good (Round 1) Sat Jul 26, 2008 1:30 pm |
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[center]man didnt u change it to 10-15 bars? aight u want topical? i call it
-+Dead at seventeeN+-
wuts happenin, god im blind. agony claws my mind im just a number, 6 2 8 4 5 9/
i miss my girl, i miss my home, too much air rushin to my dome overwhelmed. so alone/
when i arrived here..no remorse. just lyin in rows of corpses but goddamn i dunno the source/
ayo cant no one laugh at that, as im frigid tryna catch a breath in a section labeled 'Traffic deaths'/
the day i died was the same old shit, shoulda took the bus, cant hang on it, went to deaths door an banged on it/
i was too cool to bus, got me a ride, said to my mom'all the kids drive' thats the last time she saw me alive/
2:50 the bell rings, free till tomorrow. went to the car i had just borrowed fuck man i can feel the sorrow/
it dont matter hot it went i was playin. goin too fast car's swayin aint cared about gas. i aint payin/
i was havin fun. it was a blast..FUCK YAH of metal an glass, jus when i hit i look back on my past/
CRASH! i felt a wicked jolt like i been ripped by a boat. mashed up my face bloodied my coat/
i cant be dead i havent lived! i wanna go back to what i did! one more chance please i want to live!/
im in a box, where they carry me? i hear shovels this shit is scaring me. im not dead please dont bury me!/
ill be lonely! dead an green! theyll throw me on deaths trampoline. please god, im only seventeen!/
13 barz fo yuh mofuckin stars ! |
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Zos
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| Subject: Re: Zos28 vz Too Damn Good (Round 1) Mon Jul 28, 2008 12:09 pm |
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| WTF .... DQ? |
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Pun'Isha
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| Subject: Re: Zos28 vz Too Damn Good (Round 1) Mon Jul 28, 2008 3:06 pm |
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| DQ Zos Getz The Win! |
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Pun'Isha
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| Subject: Re: Zos28 vz Too Damn Good (Round 1) Mon Jul 28, 2008 3:07 pm |
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| DQ Zos Getz The Win! |
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| Subject: Re: Zos28 vz Too Damn Good (Round 1) Tue Jul 29, 2008 9:18 pm |
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| **UpDated** |
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